21Oct

Here in the Garden of Sin Prologue & Chapter 1

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• by ooza
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It is official—Here in the Garden of Sin has been posted!

I’m doing things a bit different this time around. Author’s notes will be posted here only. I’ve also turned on comments for the chapters posted here, as well as turned on anonymous reviews over on FFn. I’m going to try to make the chapters visually stimulating without being distracting. Hopefully I succeed.

The idea for HitGoS has been floating around in my head for some time now. It’s actually a mishmash of a bunch of stories I wished existed. I wanted a story where Edward lost control and attacked Bella. I wanted the way the venom worked to make sense. I wanted Bella’s shield to [censored for spoilers]. I wanted Edward to be desperate and made dark by circumstances but to somehow be redeemable, and I wanted Bella to be strong and not take any shit from him.

This is the results of many months of writing in my head! I hope you enjoy. :)

Prologue

“Pick up, pick up, please pick up!” Alice chanted as she listened to her brother’s phone ring. After what felt like an eternity, it dropped into voicemail. There was no greeting, only the beep indicating the recording had started. “Shit,” she mumbled as she hit the red button on her cell. She dialed again with the same outcome.

Not knowing what else to do, she called the only one who she knew could help.

“Alice, what’s going on?” Carlisle’s concerned voice came over the line. It was unusual for his family to call him while he was working at the hospital, and he was immediately worried that something was terribly wrong.

“It’s Edward,” she answered in a panic. “He’s gone. His future just vanished!”

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