{im} Chapter 22 Error
So I kind of made a little mistake in the last chapter. I hate to point out my errors, but I don’t want anyone to be confused. If you read Chapter 22 before noon on Thursday, you may have questioned Jake saying, “So are they really that bad, or are you freeing up your schedule for Edward?”
No, I didn’t leave off the part where Bella told him about Edward, nor does Jake have any inside information, nor did he sneak a peak at the letter. In the original version of the chapter, Bella told him about Edward, but at the last minute I decided to remove it. Unfortunately I didn’t catch his name. This is why I write fanfic and not paper books, lol.
The sentence now reads, “So are they really that bad, or are you freeing up your schedule for this guy you’re writing?”
addicted-to-romione-bedward July 8, 2011 at 10:23 am
I should have thought. I mean, I was shocked he knew the name…but until I reviewed on ff.net…I forgot to ask about that. LOL